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Your landing page’s weakest score is Value props.

How Curio (Rio) ranks

  1. 1.Particle53
  2. 2.Newsly48
  3. 3.Curio (Rio)46
  4. 4.Spun Labs18
Fix Value props
46Growth scoreupdated

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Value props

25Poor

Title, subtitle, hero — do they sell the product's true value?

Curio (Rio)’s headline vagueAfter eight long years, we have made the difficult decision to close Curio.

Working

  • Concrete proof: US$10M returned, Apple keynote, Bill Gates
  • Honest, human tone builds goodwill
  • Clear narrative of what Curio did

Could improve

  • No live product value prop anywhere
  • Successor product buried in a P.S.
  • No outcome a visitor can act on

CTA

42Poor

Copy, size, verb, cost-feel — does the primary CTA earn the click?

Particle
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Problems

  • no button or input anywhere on page
  • only action is inline 'learn more here' link
  • link buried in P.S. postscript
  • 'learn more' copy names no payoff

Graded against Lazyweb’s growth rubrics.